@anaphant, Thanks for taking the time to write this amazing feedback. I love how you stopped to analyze your "laziness."
I, too, get to the brink of depression for a couple of days, most months. I have learned to recognize my hormone-induced depression over time. During those periods, I let myself stay in bed and binge-read. That always helps!
Wow, I was following Jay with so much attention. Next chapter, wen? I want to see what will happen when K arrives. Who locked Jay in her underground room? The Matrix (centralization peeps), 馃榿
My brain is working overtime with the conspiracy theories. SciFi and fighting against a central power are a fave 馃槉